Feedback Needed: Gray Haze – Chapter 1

A Reading Test for Chapter 1 of Gray Haze is currently active on BookBoro! Sign up for free to download the epub file and provide valuable feedback! The test will be active until October 17th, at which point the test for Chapter 2 will begin. The same pattern (one chapter a week) will continue until the first 25 chapters have been posted on BookBoro. They will remain available to read for users after the testing is complete, so if you need to catch up at any point, you may do so. I will post reminders every Wednesday at 6PM MDT. 🙂


Chapter 1: When The Lights Go Out – October 10th – October 17th (3,655 words)
Chapter 2: When The Dead Linger – October 17th – October 24th
Chapter 3: When You See Them – October 24th – October 31st
Chapter 4: When The Leaves Fall – October 31st – November 7th
Chapter 5: When Lightning Strikes – November 7th – November 14th
Chapter 6: When They Come Back To Bite – November 14th – November 21st
Chapter 7: When The Sky Breaks – November 21st – November 28th
Chapter 8: When A Stranger Calls – November 28th – December 5th
Chapter 9: When Worlds Collide – December 5th – December 12th
Chapter 10: When The Sun Sets – December 12th – December 19th
Chapter 11: When A Storm Brews – January 2nd – January 9th
Chapter 12: When Shadows Flee – January 9th – January 16th
Chapter 13: When They Can’t Get Out – January 16th – January 23rd
Chapter 14: When The Tide Turns – January 23rd – January 30th
Chapter 15: When Nothing Happens – January 30th – February 6th
Chapter 16: When The Truth Is Revealed – February 6th – February 13th
Chapter 17: When Safety Is A Prison – February 13th – February 20th
Chapter 18: When Tragedy Hits – February 20th – February 27th
Chapter 19: When All Guards Are Down – February 27th – March 6th
Chapter 20: When The World Knows Your Name – March 6th – March 13th
Chapter 21: When Hope Turns Sour – March 13th – March 20th
Chapter 22: When Fear Is Deadly – March 20th – March 27th
Chapter 23: When Infection Spreads – March 27th – April 3rd
Chapter 24: When Trolls Attack – April 3rd – April 10th
Chapter 25: When Loved Ones Depart – April 10th – April 17th

If you are an editor, beta reader, or you simply have a passion for reading, please consider providing feedback when you can! It would help me tremendously! ❤

Gray Haze is a fantasy novel with a strong horror element and a subtle romance. I plan to release it in September 2019. It should be appropriate for ages 14 and up.

Here is the synopsis:

In Fog Creek, a small town in New York, the high school principal dies of a heart attack. His eldest son and daughter, MARCUS and MERCY, return home to attend his funeral and support their widowed mother and their younger, adopted brother, MALIK. The death of their father was sudden and unexpected, but clearly not out of the ordinary.

AMORA, a girl who lost both parents in a car accident when she was eighteen, left university to care for her four younger siblings. Three years later, she still works at the same popular diner and sells her art on the side. After serving a mysterious customer at the diner, Amora begins noticing lights flickering and voices wafting through her window. She inadvertently catches the source of one of the voices on video: a dark creature with red eyes.

As the paranormal occurrences increase in frequency and intensity, the townspeople fear that they will spread outside Fog Creek and wreak havoc on the world. Further conflict arises when a powerful stranger appears to shed light on their unusual circumstances. Is this newcomer their invaluable ally – or their greatest enemy?

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